tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4911389512154016124.post2443650741568192146..comments2020-04-29T16:28:12.983-07:00Comments on Joy : End of term review Rimu Studenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17389483257259220564noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4911389512154016124.post-58397075321667096702014-07-03T14:29:28.939-07:002014-07-03T14:29:28.939-07:00It is good and I like how you got the lyrics of th...It is good and I like how you got the lyrics of the song but I think you need some more full stops and you don't start a sentence with 'but'. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com