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It was a monday morning, I just got woken up by my mum to get ready for school. I got out of bed and reached down for my uniform, but it wasnt there. I looked under my bed, under my pillows, but I couldn't find my uniform anywhere.
"Kaidin have you gotten in the shower yet?"
"No mum I cant find my uniform."
" well you better find it quick or you will be going to school in your onesie!"
" But mum I cant find it anywhere it’s like its just disappeared!"
"Oh sure just like all your other stuff huh, Kaidin?"
" I got a note to go to school with to say that my uniform is lost and that I have to wear mufti just for today."
Which was a pain because every teacher i walked past asked why i'm in mufti and where my uniform is so I just showed them the note and moved on when I got home I went to go grab my iPod from where I always put it but I looked and that wasn't there either I yelled out to my mum,
"Mum have you seen my iPod?"
"No but do you know where did you last put it mum, if I knew where I last put it do you think i'd be asking you where it is."
Sorry just trying to help I thought to myself that.
"I'll try to find it later so I ran into my room to go on my PS3 but surprise surprise it’s not there Mum!"
"Oh what now Kaidin?"
"I know you're up to mischief tell me where all my stuff is Kaidin!"
"Do you really think I would hide your uniform away from you so you would go to school in your onesie?"
Now what’s gone missing now? My PS3 the whole thing, the controller is here but not my HDMI cable, power cord or my Elgato I really couldn't be bothered looking for all my stuff because it will take me hours! So I just thought of going for a bike ride I walk outside to get my bike and I couldn't believe it my bike had no tyres by this time i've had enough, I went up to my um and said
"mum i know you’ve put all my stuff somewhere, please can i have it back!" "Kaidin I have hidden your stuff away would you like to get it back?"
" Yes where is it where is it where is it right here?"
My mum led me to her bedroom, my stuff was all scattered around the room. My PS3, the power cord, the HDMI and my Elgato!
My iPod was under her drawers, and my bike tyres were under Liams bed, my uniform was in my muns drawers!
"Okay thanks mum for hiding my stuff!"
"Thats okay i'll do it again sometime hahaha, yeah right."
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