Wednesday, 24 September 2014

Write a PEEL paragraph about a family member (Mum, Dad, brother, sister etc.)

You must:

Decide on your umbrella Point  about him/her
Give at least 3 Explain reasons, each with an specific Example
Finish with a Linking sentence back to your P statement.
Use sequencing words for your reasons

My Cat is the best cat in the world because it is really fluffy and when I am sick my cat comes up to me and licks my face. Also my cat is kinda like a personal alarm clock because when i have to wake up in the morning she just jumps up onto my bed and sits on my face, and I get like tons of fur in my mouth....yum? And lastly when I wake up in the morning he is always standing on my feet waiting to be feed.

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