Write a PEEL paragraph responding to this statement
Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS.
You must:
Decide on your umbrella Point
Give at least 3 Explain reasons, each with an specific Example
Finish with a Linking sentence back to your P statement.
Use sequencing words for your reasons
Rimu is the best syndicate because we have the best teachers that always help us. We have the most fun sport that always keep us fit. We work as a team and always help each other. The Rimu teachers always plan fun things for us to do, for example last night we had our rimu house social dance which was really fun and everyone enjoyed it!
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